M. L. Kiser Poet Rhyme

The Stardust Spinner

On a planetoid in our galaxy
lives a being of illumination;
spinning stardust from her palms,
in colored chromatic ecstasy.

Like ribbons flowing from her hands
that whip and whirl in lunar-play;
she crafts rainbows in motion,
electric neon swirling bands.

Brilliant cascade of locomotion
bobbing lights in outer space;
look up to the heavens in wonder
at her bright harmonic ocean.


5-23-2021
ALL YOURS (May 25) Poetry Contest
Brian Strand

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Jan Allison March 19, 2021 at 12:35 PM what amazing imagery your poem is out of this world ML:-) hugs Jan xx M. L. Kiser April 16, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thanks so much Jan.

Panagiota Romios March 19, 2021 at 9:51 AM Hey, this is stunning and goes into my FAVS. Wow and wow. Hugs, Pangie xx M. L. Kiser April 16, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thanks so much Panagiota, I'm glad you enjoyed it that much.

L Milton Hankins March 19, 2021 at 9:24 AM Lovely work, M. L. I enjoyed it immensely, especially the movement inherent "flowing from her hands." Also, the light, i.e. "colored chromatic ecstasy." This is fine work! M. L. Kiser April 16, 2021 at 12:51 PM Thanks L. I do appreciate that.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2021 at 8:15 AM - A beautiful and colorful poem ... I see a dance of the northern lights, M.L. :) - //Anne-Lise :) M. L. Kiser April 16, 2021 at 12:51 PM Oh good, thank you.