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The Stardust Spinner

On a planetoid in our galaxy lives a being of illumination; spinning stardust from her palms, in colored chromatic ecstasy. Like ribbons flowing from her hands that whip and whirl in lunar-play; she crafts rainbows in motion, electric neon swirling bands. Brilliant cascade of locomotion bobbing lights in outer space; look up to the heavens in wonder at her bright harmonic ocean. 5-23-2021 ALL YOURS (May 25) Poetry Contest Brian Strand

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/19/2021 12:35:00 PM

what amazing imagery your poem is out of this world ML:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/19/2021 9:51:00 AM

Hey, this is stunning and goes into my FAVS. Wow and wow. Hugs, Pangie xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thanks so much Panagiota, I'm glad you enjoyed it that much.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/19/2021 9:24:00 AM

Lovely work, M. L. I enjoyed it immensely, especially the movement inherent "flowing from her hands." Also, the light, i.e. "colored chromatic ecstasy." This is fine work!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:51:00 PM

Thanks L. I do appreciate that.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2021 8:15:00 AM

- A beautiful and colorful poem ... I see a dance of the northern lights, M.L. :) - //Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:51:00 PM

Oh good, thank you.