The Stalker

house cat stalks it's prey
                                             watching, waiting to pounce ---
                                                        catnip mouse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dufresne Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 5:00 PM
haha this is a cute one Kim. Love those feline friends and this is indicative of the tamed ones we grow to love and serve as their personal servants... might as well be entertained by them
Devnath  Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Beautiful, my friend, it is. Enjoyed. bl
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Yes, for some cats the mouse is catnip but I've had a few cats who wanted nothing to do with a mouse. I remember we gave our housecat a mouse we caught outside. She just looked at it and then stuck her nose in the air. haha
Horne Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 2:22 PM
oh dear, poor old mouse! Lovely haiku, Kim
Poet Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Very nice haiku Kim.Liked it.
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