The Stalker

house cat stalks it's prey watching, waiting to pounce --- catnip mouse

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/11/2011 5:00:00 PM

haha this is a cute one Kim. Love those feline friends and this is indicative of the tamed ones we grow to love and serve as their personal servants... might as well be entertained by them

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/10/2011 7:02:00 AM

Beautiful, my friend, it is. Enjoyed. bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2011 10:50:00 PM

Yes, for some cats the mouse is catnip but I've had a few cats who wanted nothing to do with a mouse. I remember we gave our housecat a mouse we caught outside. She just looked at it and then stuck her nose in the air. haha

Jack Horne

Date: 12/9/2011 2:22:00 PM

oh dear, poor old mouse! Lovely haiku, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 12/8/2011 7:19:00 AM

Very nice haiku Kim.Liked it.