The Spire

Its peak transcends us Heaven at the top falls down Climbs back up again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 10:40 PM
quite an interesting visual, Tim. For the modern haiku contest?
Wesley Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 6:37 PM
Nancy's remark is killing me! Never the less I do like your ku.
Jones Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 6:34 PM
what an erection, eh? nice one Tim :) N
A   Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Tim,, enjoyed,..p.d
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