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The Spire

Its peak transcends us Heaven at the top falls down Climbs back up again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/30/2011 10:40:00 PM
quite an interesting visual, Tim. For the modern haiku contest?
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Date: 11/30/2011 6:37:00 PM
Nancy's remark is killing me! Never the less I do like your ku.
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Date: 11/30/2011 6:34:00 PM
what an erection, eh? nice one Tim :) N
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Date: 11/30/2011 6:24:00 PM
Tim,, enjoyed,..p.d
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