Get Your Premium Membership

The Sparrow

I sit on this branch of the cypress tree Engulfed in memories of gone-bye days Placing my deserted nest in front of me World moves on but a monument stays I selected the safest branch of the cypress Expertly using my beak, wings and claw Picked stalks from plants like jasmine and roses Using strings from the paddy’s straw With the fragrant rose petals the bed was made With love and care and undying desires The impeccable decor, the light and shade Its finishing, its beauty every bird admires Enchanting sounds of the eggshell’s pricks Breaking one after the other the canopies And peeped my adorable progeny chicks Fed them live worms to satisfy and appease Protected them from evil eyes of lustful hawks The quilt of my stretched feather served them when cold Guarded them from winds and lightning's shocks My lullabies and narration of stories untold The nest was filled with the cry of joy Dark nights came with the bright lamp of moon The sun sent its shine with a message to ‘enjoy’ The butterflies danced on a ravishing tune The juveniles were given such love and care A day came when they took to wings to fly With boldness and self esteem that eagles dare Making the nest desolate and lonely under sky My castle of love is blown and so my dreams The apathy makes my drained out eyes to cry O cypress trees and roses, my soul screams My progeny to turn and say, ‘Mama Good-bye’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/9/2012 9:55:00 PM
Glorious verse! Simply beautiful - love everything about it Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/13/2012 7:07:00 PM
Thanks for your admiration Laura. You are very kind
Date: 7/18/2012 9:03:00 AM
Enchanting poetry of nest building, eggs hatching and new life getting ready to soar to the unknown. Love the story Mohammad and am so glad I found this one I hadn't read!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2012 1:48:00 PM
Life... So well described... Terry
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 4/25/2012 11:57:00 AM
Thanks, Terry, for your very kind comments
Date: 3/26/2012 2:25:00 AM
I can relate most of this to the situation of someone I know. This is yet another masterpiece, dear uncle.
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/26/2012 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read my poem, Hussain. You have related it to someone you know. The poem is intended for that. It is not just the story of a sparrow. It has so much pain and anguish behind it.
Date: 3/8/2012 7:36:00 PM
like Poe's The Raven sir, haunting and searing to the soul. beautiful poem
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/11/2012 6:36:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments on my poem. -Mohammad
Date: 3/5/2012 5:48:00 PM
A perfect write of poetic nature. I enjoyed your poem very much.
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/11/2012 1:46:00 PM
I am obliged to you for your lavish praise of my poem. Thank you Kevin
Date: 3/5/2012 11:10:00 AM
what great imagery in your poetry. It has great flowing nature to it. Thank you for appreciating my poetry as well, sincerely, Cindy Lu
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/5/2012 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Cindy for your uplifting comments. You are very kind
Date: 3/3/2012 1:29:00 PM
great imagery Mohammed!
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/4/2012 8:19:00 AM
Thanks for the compliments, Lisa. You are very kind. -Mohammad
Date: 3/3/2012 11:05:00 AM
Beautiful poem Mohammad, a completed poem !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/4/2012 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Anne for your heartwarming comments. I am so glad you liked it. Love
Date: 3/3/2012 9:15:00 AM
a glamorous write cleverly crafted with dynamic rhyme Mohammad and a visual delight to read.. my poem Whippoorell also has vast imagery portraying the lovely bird and lasting luv.. too.. thanxxx for reading my poetry luv..
Login to Reply
Yamin Avatar
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/5/2012 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Linda, your comments have made my day. I'll surely read your poem whippoorell
Date: 3/3/2012 9:07:00 AM
very beautiful!! thank you for your kind words on my poem
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs