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The space between

There exists a space between us that has widened since the passing, which slowly fills with more distrust as faint demons start trespassing. The closeness of a touch still there; but eyes that once stared into mine now focus elsewhere, in despair; beyond, and to that baleful shrine. Words attempt to bridge the distance; depart to fade, arrive unheard. We live in ghostly coexistence, you, deep in bitter loss, interred. And so we spend our long days thus; love parting, contempt amassing. There exists a space between us, that has widened since the passing.

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Date: 5/1/2024 3:25:00 AM
Terry, a great emotive poem.
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Date: 4/23/2024 12:58:00 PM
This is so profound. It sounds to me like maybe a child died. I see lots of movies in which one of the spouses can't take the death, and they withdraw and become impossible to reach. It's so sad that some cannot move on and remember that others still need and love them.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/24/2024 2:23:00 AM
Thank you Andrea it is an observational piece on two people I know, but I chose to compose it in the first person as it seemed more powerful
Date: 4/23/2024 9:15:00 AM
WOW!!! You said it all. A great write...  Fav for me. Have a blessed day writing away.........................
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/24/2024 2:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula

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