The Sour Deceiver

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Image result for pictures of a man caught cheating on his wife

A mother with a baby boy
Another child now on its way
A husband who pledged love~a ploy
Slips with the adulteress away
Adulteress' husband comes home; their dismay

Caught, well, almost; that playboy 
Slithered out the window unclothed
No way to escape; life will destroy
Trapped naked outside unabashed 
Lied, lied his friend's reputation trashed

Written: June 25, 2016
Contest: Sweet Little Lies
Sponsor: Silent One

The husband went to the house 
next door/ Got the person there
to call his friend to come get 
him..His friend took him(the husband) to
the husband's mother's house..The mother
went to her son's house to
get him more clothes. The 
husband told his wife that 
his friend was caught with another
woman and he(the husband) had
to rescue him by bringing to his mother's
house and get him clothes..Yeah!!
Right!! Who believes that one???

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/10/2016 3:59:00 PM
sadly this sort of thing happens - great for the contest
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Date: 6/25/2016 4:20:00 PM
Oh the folly of mankind at times Sara, hope this well written piece does well in the contest.'
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/25/2016 5:11:00 PM
Yes, follies for sure but it was wrong on both parties part and doubly wrong on the man's part with a wife at home with young children..As Dr. Phil would say what in the world is wrong with you man??? Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Date: 6/25/2016 3:59:00 PM
oh what a sad state of 'affairs' great take on the contest - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/25/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment..Sin will take a person down the wrong road that leads to their destruction..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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