Gael Attal Poet Rhyme

The Sound of Meaning

The sound of Meaning
Wailing emotions
Whimpers with grief
At Logic’s intentions
	
The sound of Purpose
Whistling to dance
Spits in the face
Of theorized Chance

The sound of Judgment
Thunders with treason
Struggles to balance
Logic and Reason

The sound of Fate
Laughs and cries
Gets to decide
Truth from Lies

The sound of Liberty
Throats are sore
Strongly resembles
The sound of War

The sound of War
Snickers at Judgment
For human Logic
Serves punishment

The sound of Logic
Deafening with hate
Easily dispatches of
Purpose and Fate

The sound of Meaning
Wailing emotions
Whimpers with grief
At Logic’s intentions

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Corinne Curcio February 12, 2009 at 10:06 AM Excellent writing Gael! Congrats on having this fine poem featured

Izzy Gumbo February 12, 2009 at 6:04 AM wow, nicely done, great use of words, great expression. Congrats on the feature! Izzy.

Michael Jordan February 10, 2009 at 6:01 PM Very well written piece that is full of well expressed thought - wonderful job on this - Congrats on being featured - God bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown February 10, 2009 at 10:20 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 10, 2009 at 7:23 AM Congatulations Gael on "The Sound of Meaning" being featured this week. Will mankind ever learn? We hear only what we want. Logic seldom plays a part but Greed and hunger for power overshadow it when it does. God Bless. Vince

Amy Swanson February 10, 2009 at 4:53 AM Excellent! Love the flow, love the rhythm, love the message, love IT! Lots of thought in this and I love how you ended with the beginning, like it reflects back unto itself and really wraps up the whole piece. Very nice use of phrasing and imagery here, well-deserving of being featured this week. Love, Amy

Sue Mason February 9, 2009 at 1:44 PM Awesome messages here and one to ponder with more than one readding!! Very well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup. Congratulations, Gael !!

Arany P. February 9, 2009 at 12:49 AM Wonderful use of words! Flowing greatly to the image you have imprinted! ~ Arany

February 8, 2009 at 6:09 PM This strong verbs work well. Nice use of personification and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Derrick Burton January 5, 2009 at 11:52 AM this was a concerned write and feels like it directed to humanity. enjoyed reading.

Judy Riley January 5, 2009 at 10:46 AM Good meaning and flow, nice use of metophor, well written, thanks for sharing. Judy Riley

Laurie Ginn January 5, 2009 at 12:43 AM This is wonderful, each stanza so short and to the point. Sometimes the fewer the words the louder the message. Laurie

Gael Attal January 4, 2009 at 9:02 PM Thank you for welcoming me and I'm glad you enjoyed it ^.^

Keith Bickerstaffe January 4, 2009 at 8:59 PM Whew! ...quite the piece of philosophy here. So well constructed... rhymes are great. This one will bear repeated readings! BRAVO Gael, and welcome to the Soup! Best wishes, Keith