- the Soul Knows -

The earth is dressed in a white robe - snow graffiti on the wall
Deliciously frozen thoughts melting away into another Kingdom 

Our words served in gold of passion and sweetly kiss
Colour shines transparent 

As the soft feeling of heated drops
tumble down the cheeks saving grace 

The tears will fall on fertile soil, quietly the water decreases 
There are no limitations so make your heart strong not weak

Fight your worries and sorrows - taste the love
Reflections kissing warmly each memory stored precious 

Tasting salt upon lips 
Because dearest lily of the deep lake 

When a soul knows the unknown pathway leads upwards
We all have a special place in this world no one else can fill or walk alongside 

Listen to the sound of angels playing harps from above
Smell the roses and breathe in the fresh clean air

True love from the heart of a flower never dies, 
always giving goosebumps a new meaning







A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
08.07.2016
(unrhymed couplets)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 12:57 PM
enjoyed the lithesome, tender mood of your collab write, liam and anne... more power to the both of you.. huggs
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:17 PM
The first couplet blew me away - wonderful imagery throughout Anne lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx
Troutman Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 6:58 PM
What lovely words. Your very talented. I really enjoyed it
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