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The Soul I Sold ---:2

If I seem down
forgive me

frowns I carry around
live in me

you may say,
ya' see right through me

your words untrue,
renew me

the hurt I’ve learned
brews in me

if only you could
re-design me

take time rewind,
refine me

recreate the mold, without lies I’ve told;
give back the soul I sold.

®~JSLambert

devotionfaithhopeintrospectionlifelyric

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

September 21, 2011 at 2:02 AM

this is another hot one... of course.."the hurt i've learned brews in me....if only you could re-design me...luvin it...

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2011 at 9:46 AM

This reminded me of some song from long ago. I can't remember its name now. It really is like music,& I can see it being shaped into a cool song! Off to the gym now, but I enjoyed being able to see this one on my way out! Oh, I just noticed you labeled it Lyric. I used to think that form meant lyics like to music, and in this case it truly would fit that description. It was not until just recently that I discovered lyric meant "showing one's emotions" you certainly did that too with this poem.

John Aaron Green

June 22, 2011 at 8:01 PM

even through the eye of the storm,,,,you were never alone..............great poem....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 21, 2011 at 4:35 AM

wonderful words JS and all u have to do to get it back..though it does not ever leave.. is take back the words u let it go ... simple and easy luv..the power is in the words of the tongue ..always.. words are powerful...this is a powerful piece my friend... thankxx for your many great comments on my poetry.. playing catch up to reply.. house hunting and kitten hunting..luv..oh..