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The Song

When does a poem become a song? Does the music make it real? A melody makes us sing along But the words are from the quill Without the words the music's blind It can't see where to go For the words are how a song's defined And the music's just for show Wrapped in notes and chords to tease It's meant to entertain But it always takes the words to please Or the music's played in vain The words are there to touch the heart Or the music might be missed For it only plays a minute part If the words did not exist Some has said that poetry's dead But they couldn't be more wrong For the poet sees the music's fed Or there couldn't be a song Note: This will be my last poem I post for a while...it's time to move on to other things.....Whisk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/17/2015 4:17:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 7/26/2013 12:40:00 PM
you kept your word. but i still appriciate you as a poet. one that knows the real purpose of poetry. you never commented on my poetry though. i guess you were jealous of the compitition. seeing i had serious skills also. do the world a favor keep writing. what am i saying?... you can't stop! it's your calling. you can't stop. maybe change the channel but you cant stop.
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Date: 6/10/2013 3:41:00 PM
Hi Larry - Just a note to wish you a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY, my friend. Many happy returns! Ralph Note: Haven't been too active on PS lately as my wife of 54 years passed away on 5/7/13.
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Date: 6/10/2013 4:57:00 PM
Ralph, I am so sorry to hear of your loss, my friend. You and your family will be in my prayers and I hope God grants you peace that He promises passeth all understanding. If you ever need a friend, I'm here. Your friend, Larry
Date: 4/24/2013 3:58:00 PM
Fantastic, Larry. Another great write. So sorry to hear you won't be posting for a while. I've enjoyed every one of your postings. All the best to you and yours. Deepest regards, my friend. Ralph
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Date: 4/10/2013 5:33:00 PM
i don't know if musicians would agree with you, but i think that most poets (aka lyricists) would. nicely said!
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