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The Son With All Stars Blazing

Stare-well.! gazing..As emotions and souls to your Majestic fields aspire.. Temporal surrounds me, ambiguous background; below crested fallow moons.." Amplified." Intensity' as stellar images fall silently; while cresendos of beauty abound Innumerable shifts of light and dark in shaded displays make play! & re-plays are seen. Roaming tails of light deny non-existence, "and pass on" in twillight realms... Wholly indescribable energy masses pirouette; in an eternity of loose and endings" Always immaculate ways, and untrod paths scintillate to Mercurial growth anon..) Yea' though is interposed my earthly being; tis the more to highlight heavenly ways, To rebirth.! "and with all glory" the celestial tapestry alludes to His-story.." Orbs in incandescence implode.! as platignum stairways transpire..) Though my script be no match.) the words not worthy of re-counting be, so let it be.! Haze's of swirl glazed and gaseous liquid nimbus; gather possibility's beyond reason Eclipse, is a true part of the many story's played upon this..! of aeons august stage. Starry foot-light stair-well "to be or not to be"of such is all the honor i seek to attain, True enrichment there'to is revolving; where'of my soul is to pertaining And there my"die is cast..!as midst the maddening crowd" i cry with sullied eyes.) Revering and wishing upon the great lights life i see in para-present skies So i endure..passing all lights are.! await i "a mote of such to be,In the one Gods sight. Copyright Joe Maverick.co.uk 2012 For Linda-Maries Stairway to the stars contest.

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Date: 5/2/2017 9:03:00 AM
Nice flow mate. Thanks fir presenting this piece to me, much appreciated.
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Date: 12/20/2012 5:54:00 PM
you are very smart you must be an older gentleman i gave you a 7
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Date: 6/16/2012 5:00:00 PM
Hello Joe, how are you?? I'm gonna ask... Are you not writing at the moment? xoxoxox PD
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Date: 4/10/2012 9:32:00 AM
mighty magnificent Joe.. the imagery takes one's breath away luv.. so enjoyed this creative write from your most gifted pen my friend.. hope u are doing well ...
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Date: 3/30/2012 10:50:00 AM
This is beautiful, Joe! "Roaming tails of light deny non-existence,,"and pass on" in twilight realms"...a well of profoundly sagacious depth, Joe. Makes me think of the trails of sun beams from the setting sun. Thoughts of "Jacob ladders" where the angels climb and descend. A deep and searching write, Joe! Best wishes, love, Mikki
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Date: 3/26/2012 10:34:00 PM
Hello, Joe, thanks for reading my poetry while i was on vacation. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/23/2012 5:53:00 PM
Just had to read again; so much astral beauty in this! :)
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:53:00 AM
Really nice write! Don't you hate when you don't have enough room? Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:59:00 PM
Your choice of words makes me spin in celestial places that defy reality Joe. This is so beautiful that I faved it to read again and again. LUv, Lizziy
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:29:00 PM
Speechless! like no beginning and no end, almost infinite. awesome piece here joe, good luck on the contest
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:13:00 PM
Well Joe, I couldn't thin of any better description of this poem than "a stairway to the stars" You'll have to write another one to get me back down! :)
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Date: 3/3/2012 10:57:00 AM
Joe your poetic gifts are so obvious in this write luv.. wonderful lines of rare emotion.. hope u are well.. luv..
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Date: 3/3/2012 7:05:00 AM
Very good Joe, like this one from you must have bumped your head your getting truly great in your writtings, just to let you know I'm kidding it was a great up-lifter and your work is from the Father, God blesses us everyday doesn't he and thank you for kind comments, hopefully one day I'll be able to pen verses like you do, God bless
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Date: 3/3/2012 6:53:00 AM
Joe, how are you? is it raining in your part of the sod? it is here....we had warnings of tornados and lightning last night but all is well.....
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:53:00 PM
Hello, there, Joe. Nice seeing you tonight over at my poem. Wishing you a lovely weekend!
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:35:00 PM
Beautiful write, Joe. Many congrats, my friend : )
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:55:00 PM
I still love it Joe , of aeons august stage, the die is cast the everlasting foes, bitter distant cries, i know, for eternity never lies...
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:58:00 AM
congrats Joe, this is so good, so moving and inspirational. Harry
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:12:00 AM
Belated Congratulations Joe, smehow I had missed your name when I went through the list. Beg forgivness please and congrats on any other wins I may have missed xx
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:50:00 PM
Just dropping by to say hello and thanks for your comment tonight. You Sweet guy!!
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Date: 2/24/2012 2:00:00 PM
WoW! A truly fine Acrostic. Linda Marie should love this. A fine entry. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/23/2012 5:19:00 AM
very majestic write.....deserving of the heavens......
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:17:00 PM
joe, I am sorry for the troubles you are having. Please keep in touch!!
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Date: 2/22/2012 4:04:00 PM
Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest..This one is very descriptive and expressive..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:52:00 AM
This has to be one of he best acrostic poems I've ever seen. You faith shines in this write, my friend. You are blessed with a beautiful soul. Love, Carolyn
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