Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Cinquain

The Solar Effect

The Sun 
The nucleus
Of our space radius
A constant, its incandescence
Essence.

Its light
Energy source
Divinely bestowed force
That burst across the Universe
Defers.

Power
Of attraction
In all things and beings
Magnified by the force of love
Above.

Creates
A  huge cocoon
Of warmth like a greenhouse
That gave birth to our planet earth
Our berth.

The sun 
Solar effect
That will never object
To the release of its light beams
In speed.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 02.07.10

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Simone Segal February 13, 2010 at 1:27 PM Love your poem, like the sola effect, you effect those that read! love Simone

David Byrne February 8, 2010 at 6:14 PM Nice words here!

Robert A. Dufresne February 8, 2010 at 12:22 PM Whew I think these Cinquains are a little too tough for me, Caroline. you're doing well though! Nice work. Thank you for your much needed encouragement on a most unpopular subject that needs humanity's attention once and for all. God bless you. -Robert

Carol Sunshine Brown February 8, 2010 at 12:01 PM I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Caroline. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Gerard Keogh Jr. February 8, 2010 at 9:44 AM I give you high marks for suceeding in thjis most challenging format. It' not easy to do, I know. One and three are truly exceptional. I wish I had done this. Thank you for your kindness. Regards, Gerard.

February 7, 2010 at 3:57 PM What an uplifting view. Nice cinquain series. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen