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The Solar Effect

The Sun The nucleus Of our space radius A constant, its incandescence Essence. Its light Energy source Divinely bestowed force That burst across the Universe Defers. Power Of attraction In all things and beings Magnified by the force of love Above. Creates A huge cocoon Of warmth like a greenhouse That gave birth to our planet earth Our berth. The sun Solar effect That will never object To the release of its light beams In speed. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 02.07.10

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Date: 2/13/2010 1:27:00 PM
Love your poem, like the sola effect, you effect those that read! love Simone
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:14:00 PM
Nice words here!
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Date: 2/8/2010 12:22:00 PM
Whew I think these Cinquains are a little too tough for me, Caroline. you're doing well though! Nice work. Thank you for your much needed encouragement on a most unpopular subject that needs humanity's attention once and for all. God bless you. -Robert
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Date: 2/8/2010 12:01:00 PM
I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Caroline. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 9:44:00 AM
I give you high marks for suceeding in thjis most challenging format. It' not easy to do, I know. One and three are truly exceptional. I wish I had done this. Thank you for your kindness. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 2/7/2010 3:57:00 PM
What an uplifting view. Nice cinquain series. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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