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The Soft Rime

The picturesque white haired landscape                                                                          Windows of icy flowers offer a prismatic show                                                                Thorny ice crystals everywhere the trees cannot escape                                                       Even time seems to stand still frozen by the hoary cold                                                             Grabbing up some graupel like a treasure of frigid pearls                                                                     Everything is now crystalline even the mist                                                                                              frosty winds have taken control with its Midas swirls                                                                                Wondering what kind of wintery spell is this

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Date: 9/25/2015 5:58:00 AM
Hi John. Very nice poem about the frozen landscape and the feelings you had while writing it. I enjoyed it.... Robert.
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John Beam
Date: 9/25/2015 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, Robert. Nice to met you on the soup.

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