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The Soft Bubbling Brook

the soft bubbling brook within risshun, sweet, sweet sound… path’s aroma’s great Russell Sivey 10/29/11 Entrant into Charles Henderson's "Very Strict Haiku" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:46:00 AM

RUSSELL, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR POEM,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/7/2011 10:26:00 PM

Mr. Webster had to teach me a quick lesson on your vocab for this haiku..so the Japanese tossed the Lunar calendar and went Gregorian, huh? I like the idea of revamping to accomodate the Japanese farmers..now my mind takes me to walking along a cool bubbly brook during the first days of Spring..and yes, how important the aroma is to the reawakened stagnant winter soul? Now your haiku means something to me! Love it! Off to your next haiku......

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/7/2011 10:19:00 PM

I gotta go talk to Mr. Webster and then I will be "write" back.......

Jack Horne

Date: 10/31/2011 10:01:00 AM

lovely haiku, Russell

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/29/2011 1:53:00 PM

Good luck with this one, Russell!! What could be lovelier than the sound of a bubbling brook?

Date: 10/29/2011 11:55:00 AM

Nice imagery in this one. Wishing you the best with your writing. Karen