Mystic Rose Rose Poet Quintain (English)

The Snowflake

She dances at the edge of my mind 
That little frilly dolly, coy and shy 
With cipher weight she slow unwinds  
leaving me with a desire to fly   
as she melts away and turns to nigh

   

Winter quintain
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Francine Roberts 
17/12/2021

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Lindsay Laurie December 21, 2021 at 7:35 PM Hello Vie ... I do enjoy reading poems like yours about snow as it never snows here, just turns everything white with frost - thank you Vie - Lindsay

Jan Allison December 17, 2021 at 5:14 PM such a joy to read Vie:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar December 17, 2021 at 9:47 AM Lovely descriptive poem. I wish I could see a snowflake. We have only wind and rain here. Hugs.