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The Sneeze

The sneeze echoes through the hollow
Roosters almost sing hallelujah
As the golden sun rises high
Bringing warm light slowly to you

Another day granted ~stretches
Offers possibilities
What opportunities will happen
Bolstering Holy Spirit; frees  

Let Him nudge, conjole hearts open
Ready to receive His special gift
Of awesome unconditional love
This gives humankind an awesome lift
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Michael Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 2:18 PM
I enjoyed this one...You have done incredible work. I'm amazed...Thanks for sharing...A good evening to you.
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Arturo, Thanks for your kind review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by, reading my work and taking time to comment..Sara
Horne Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 1:18 PM
lovely uplifting write, my friend x
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