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The Snails Day

Snails are slow always making tracks
sliding along with their shells on their backs.
Munching on plants as they crawl along
singing a happy song all day long.

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Beata Agustin

February 26, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 5, 2016 at 3:40 PM

THOMAS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

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August 16, 2012 at 7:43 AM

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 16, 2012 at 5:37 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Thomas. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writings with us. Love, Carol 08/16/2012

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August 16, 2012 at 2:56 AM

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August 15, 2012 at 11:57 AM

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