The Snail

Early morning, Carl Schurz Park,
And something caught my eye.
Right near my foot, a snail was 
Inching forward, my oh my!

For surely someone on the path
Would crush his lovely shell;
Protection-wise, it really didn’t
Serve him very well.

I found a leaf and hoped he’d crawl
Upon it; what I’d planned
Was to move him to a place both safe
And on some grassy land.

A stranger saw me crouching down 
And asked was I okay.
I pointed to the snail and thought
He’d soon be on his way.

But “Let me help” was what he said.
He lifted up the leaf
And found the perfect placement 
Which, to all, was a relief.

He asked my name and shook my hand;
Our goodbye smiles agreed
That, by noticing the small things,
We’d both done a real good deed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 9:08 PM
The absolute best things in life are free! A helping hand, a collaboration, a good deed well done. A smile. Lovely story, Ilene. Thanks so much for sharing. ~ Gershon
Bauer Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 1:16 PM
always a pleasure to have a comment from you, gershon! thank you!
Poet Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 4:54 AM
Ilene, your excellent poem offers a delightful glimpse into a simple yet meaningful moment. The imagery of the snail's journey and the encounter with a helpful stranger is heartwarming. The poem captures a sense of community and the joy of paying attention to the small wonders around us. It tells a lovely story of kindness and connection in an engaging way. Great job!
Bauer Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 1:15 PM
thank you so much for this lovely comment, sotto poet! much appreciated...
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 8:43 PM
A sweetly observed narrative in neat rhyming quatrains, where a vulnerable snail brings two strangers together. The poem’s warm, unhurried rhythm reflects its message beautifully: noticing and protecting small lives can create a meaningful human connection.
Bauer Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 1:14 PM
thank you, alison! sometimes i write something of which i'm particularly proud (you must know the feeling) and this is one of those times. i appreciate your kind words...
Rolland Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 3:42 PM
wonderful, i like to help snails when i can, their life is not so easy, there are so gentle, in France we eat them with butter and garlic, delicious have a nice day
Bauer Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 1:12 PM
ha! yes, i've eaten them myself, yann, though it's very different seeing one trying to survive in the city. thanks for your supportive comments...
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace