The Smoking Girl

That young girl 
Is Fair skin
And tall waist
Is howling shaking
On the terrace after the rain
Smoking fiercely
 
Her glamorous body is trembling and
Beautiful eyes are filled with hatred and confusion
Being narcosis
In the hazy smoke
Getting lost
In the lonely sorrow 

She
Is coldly watching passers
Disdains revealing suffers 

A rebellious drama
On the way to nowhere
Vigorously being staged 
The main character of the drama 
Is sucking the poison to murder her own
In the coldness of the rain
Trying to jump out from the misery 
But deeply immersing in the abyss of ignorance

By Yunyan GU 
03 Jan. 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Eruteya Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 4:01 AM
Good work, Yunyan. Kindly take note of those tiny errors of syntax.
Gu Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 4:29 AM
Thanks for the advice, I will.English is my third Language...cheers.
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