The Smile

They all grew wings and flew away
to distant lands, leaving the nest empty.
In the void of desolateness prevailing
my sky was draped in shades of grey,

until down the years lonely and long
when third generation buds blossomed,
albeit in the alien garden so far away,
to me the colors of joy drifted along.

The smile of grandchildren on ipad I see
each morning flashing like dawning sun.
From gloomy horizon of emptiness I rise
while the aura of delight embraces me.

May 24, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mitra Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 8:34 PM
A very elated feeling so well captured by beautiful poetic power
Dutta Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 12:59 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win. My greatest attraction to see the smiling face of my granddaughter on Sunday thru Skype.
Roper Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Beautiful poem, Subimal, congratulations on your fantastic win. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Yes, one thing media is good for is seeing pics of grandkids, having an easy way to keep in touch! Congrats!
Sergi Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 12:38 PM
A beautiful write!
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Very nice. :) Smoothly written too :)
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