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The Sky Tonight

The sky tonight is full of scars Gaping like my heart-flesh Punctures of its myriad stars Still bloody red and fresh Oh night, don't slip away I have much more to say Before you turn to day I will make right The sky tonight
September 17th, 2021 Quietus

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Date: 10/4/2021 9:40:00 AM
"Oh night, don't slip away I have much more to say Before you turn to day" Indeed, so poetic! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/17/2021 1:45:00 PM
imagery is superb I love poems about the moon and stars, good luck in the contest
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Jackie Chou
Date: 9/17/2021 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Jan!

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