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The Sky

The sky dims with bittersweet, tangerine, clementine and peach. Strokes intricate and broad, intimate and inclement brushed on. As creative as DNA, each day a corpus canvas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/6/2024 5:51:00 PM
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Dear Kim, I am enthralled with your spectacular imagery and word pairings. Each line sings with your artistry. I adored the vibrant colors of sunset, the pairing of "intimate and inclement" and your potent, creative last line! Exquisite poetry seasoned just right with a subtle sprinkling of alliterations. Warmest wishes dear poet.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2024 5:58:00 AM
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You’ve made my day! Thank you so much, Susan!
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Paige Hind
Date: 11/30/2024 12:38:00 PM
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Just breathtaking, Kim. I love, love, love "DNA"- so genius. <3 ooxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2024 5:58:00 AM
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Thank you so very much! :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/28/2024 5:27:00 PM
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just a painter work and so delicious, thanks poet kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2024 5:58:00 AM
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Thank you, Yann :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/28/2024 8:59:00 AM
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I enjoyed reading your "The Sky" write. I love the sky by day or night.... Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2024 5:57:00 AM
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Both have their intricacies :) Thank you and blessings, Paula!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2024 7:17:00 PM
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Corpus canvass on Cape Canaveral! Houston, NO PROBLEMS! 'Cos I'm in Florida! ~ Orange Shocker
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2024 5:56:00 AM
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Warming up dem bones in Florida, eh!?
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2024 12:59:00 PM
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- I see this beautiful sunset ... a beautiful work of art on canvas, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2024 5:36:00 PM
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Thank you, sweet friend!
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John Read
Date: 11/27/2024 12:02:00 PM
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Hi Kim, I enjoyed reading your colourful description of the Sky, must admit it's the first time I've heard of a Sijo poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2024 5:37:00 PM
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There are so many great forms to explore!

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