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The Sky

The sky dims with bittersweet, tangerine, clementine and peach.
Strokes intricate and broad, intimate and inclement brushed on.
As creative as DNA, each day a corpus canvas.

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2024

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December 6, 2024 at 5:51 PM

Dear Kim, I am enthralled with your spectacular imagery and word pairings. Each line sings with your artistry. I adored the vibrant colors of sunset, the pairing of "intimate and inclement" and your potent, creative last line! Exquisite poetry seasoned just right with a subtle sprinkling of alliterations. Warmest wishes dear poet.. ~Susan

December 7, 2024 at 5:58 AM

You’ve made my day! Thank you so much, Susan!

November 30, 2024 at 12:38 PM

Just breathtaking, Kim. I love, love, love "DNA"- so genius. <3 ooxx

December 7, 2024 at 5:58 AM

Thank you so very much! :)

November 28, 2024 at 5:27 PM

just a painter work and so delicious, thanks poet kim

December 7, 2024 at 5:58 AM

Thank you, Yann :)

Paula Goldsmith

November 28, 2024 at 8:59 AM

I enjoyed reading your "The Sky" write. I love the sky by day or night.... Have a blessed day writing away.......................

December 7, 2024 at 5:57 AM

Both have their intricacies :) Thank you and blessings, Paula!

November 27, 2024 at 7:17 PM

Corpus canvass on Cape Canaveral! Houston, NO PROBLEMS! 'Cos I'm in Florida! ~ Orange Shocker

December 7, 2024 at 5:56 AM

Warming up dem bones in Florida, eh!?

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 27, 2024 at 12:59 PM

- I see this beautiful sunset ... a beautiful work of art on canvas, Kim :) - hugs

November 27, 2024 at 5:36 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

November 27, 2024 at 12:02 PM

Hi Kim, I enjoyed reading your colourful description of the Sky, must admit it's the first time I've heard of a Sijo poem.

November 27, 2024 at 5:37 PM

There are so many great forms to explore!

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