The Skies Rain Flack

Sun's a mean blue
    two clouds turn black
  The wind blows sand
    the skies rain flack

  Early Spring, war-torn Ukraine
    reflects a nation's searing pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 2:04 PM
There’s no peace in Chicago either. . Just people slaughtering one another, a city war. In other cities as well. Forebdiing, well done poem The USA has idea what’s ahead for us when title 42 ends. Pangie
Romios Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Perfect Perfect,,, Red Rover, Red Rover, let Fentanyl come over, And terrorists, killers and rapists, go toDover, Death on the hoof. I am not being funny. Hope they have enough body bags, many stores closing here, in CA, come on down, you can steal up to 950 dollars and go free. After 42 folds … Americans will have plentry to eschew! Pangie
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 3:44 PM
When Title 42 ends, entitlement really begins! ~ Red Rover, Red Rover, Can I Come Over?! lol.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 9:44 AM
A powerful write with a few words. Have a blessed day/weekend..........
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 3:48 PM
Thanks for the generous analysis, Paula!
Hawkins Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 5:33 AM
Too much pain in Ukraine, Please help them to have some peace again. Enough, already.
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 3:49 PM
What Ukraine has endured -- and still faces -- has not been seen since WW2.
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