The Skater

The skater falls
The girl bawls
The agony of mistake
So much to forsake

Dreams realized
Fans and commentators idealize
A flawless routine
An injury not foreseen

The blade glides
The coach guides
The thrill of winning
Their head spinning

The loser's misfortune
Points earned, only a portion
Their head bowed in emotional upset
Replaying the error, lots of regret

The winner soars
The loser closed doors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rigoler Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 2:31 PM
I have personally experienced your poem in real life as in my younger days I was an avid figure skater. I know the elation of winning and the agony of losing! / Maurice
Leffanta Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 10:17 AM
Some losers accept their defeat whereas others learn from their mistakes . . . . Enjoyed!
D. Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 6:18 AM
True. Thanks for your comment.
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