The Sisters

T he pressure is building up
H ere I am thinking of both of them
E ven though I like both I have to stick to one 

S ee what both have to say 
I wanted to be with niki but…
S he rejected me
T abitha has not rejected me yet but she ignores me allot
E ven though I like both both of them have done something to me
R ejection sucks not getting attention does to so what do I do 
S imple see which one likes me the most
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 11:33 PM
Looks like you found the solution yourself, great acrostic...Raul
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March 31, 2009 at 2:41 AM
Clever poetry Josh.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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March 30, 2009 at 9:52 PM
So much torment in this one, but its good, go to chat, ok? Fantastic write babe Aleera
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