The Sinners Last Impression

Although I take the punishment, you made it come to this
It's all your fault I took the knife and plunged it in your chest
The final, heated moment before you met your demise
Tainted with your love for her, humility and lies
You think that I am happy now? Is that what you believe?
Apart from feeling numb, I'm clutching nothing but relief
Comforted that my arms were the last ones your hands touched
I never could keep hold of you, I never was enough
I knew this time was different, I could see it in your face
Your cheeks had lost their pallor, eyes as wide as space
And this time, I had lost you, I knew I'd never win
That's why I had to carve your heart from underneath your skin
I couldn't find another way to make a last impression
and make sure that your cheating heart was kept in my possession
Then as your just-dead body bleeds, sprawled out on the stone
Peace and solice seep in, for at last, you sleep alone

27th January 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Selfa Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations Jodie! You truly are deserving! :)-HANS
Kimathi Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Hi Jodie. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Gentry Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Excellent! I was hooked from start to finish. Well done. Congratulations on your 2nd place win! A 7
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February 7, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Hi Jodie, Congrats on your awesome win. Love lINDA
Jameson Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Powerful words, congrats on your placement, Jodie.
Lawless Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Jodie, this is a "vicious" take on the "wages of sin is death" mantra. The opening couplet "hooked" me and drew me in....and the last couplet....viscious. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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January 31, 2016 at 8:53 PM
EPIC WRITE................SKAT
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