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The Silhouette's View

Gazing at an abandoned silhouette, sitting amongst polite stars throughout the night Striking hair carelessly blowing amid cool zephyrs, curiosity climbed crevices of my spine to witness such a mesmerizing sight Interest reached its summit, I couldn’t resist to share the silhouettes’ zephyrs and intent A nervous stride through high tides of grass as I went to join in the silhouettes event I arrived, hey I’m James, didn’t mean to disturb you, just kind of wanted to share your view The silhouette slightly giggled and asked me something around the lines of what’s my aim Well I know this is going to sound kind of lame but I had an irresistible feeling so I came Just wanted to share the view with you and I must say its one hell of a view to claim Yeah it is, I sit in this field to answers questions about life that I just can’t solve If this view has the power of resolve this is destiny I thank you for letting me be involved Another gorgeous chuckle sailed the draft as we sat in comforting silence Time passed Wind hymned Clouds wept We remained Lost in thought, Blessed by the view Unexpected in time the silhouette whispered “Blessings lie within the view” The beautiful silences embraced us once more Time passed Clouds wept We remained Lost in thought, Blessed by the view No matter what be you view, always find it when in search of you. “Blessings rest within the view” Silhouette

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/24/2009 4:59:00 AM
I soo love the title and the whole concept of the piece. How original James, beautifully done. Laurie
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:51:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, so warm and intriguing, it takes you to a peaceful place...A beautiful experience...everlasting impression....One I'm sure you will treasure for a long time...Thanks for sharing and Thank you for your comment on my poetry..God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:51:00 PM
beauifully written james =)...i like this!! ~best wishes~ *Breana
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