The Silhouette's View

Gazing at an abandoned silhouette, sitting amongst polite stars throughout the night
Striking hair carelessly blowing amid cool zephyrs, curiosity climbed crevices of my spine to 
witness such a mesmerizing sight
Interest reached its summit, I couldn’t resist to share the silhouettes’ zephyrs and intent
A nervous stride through high tides of grass as I went to join in the silhouettes event
I arrived, hey I’m James, didn’t mean to disturb you, just kind of wanted to share your view
The silhouette slightly giggled and asked me something around the lines of what’s my aim
Well I know this is going to sound kind of lame but I had an irresistible feeling so I came
Just wanted to share the view with you and I must say its one hell of a view to claim
Yeah it is, I sit in this field to answers questions about life that I just can’t solve 
If this view has the power of resolve this is destiny I thank you for letting me be involved
Another gorgeous chuckle sailed the draft as we sat in comforting silence
Time passed
Wind hymned
Clouds wept
We remained
Lost in thought, Blessed by the view
Unexpected in time the silhouette whispered 
“Blessings lie within the view”

The beautiful silences embraced us once more
 Time passed    
 Clouds wept
 We remained 
 Lost in thought, 
Blessed by the view
 
No matter what be you view, always find it when in search of you.
                                   
                                        “Blessings rest within the view” Silhouette

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/24/2009 4:59:00 AM
I soo love the title and the whole concept of the piece. How original James, beautifully done. Laurie
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:51:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, so warm and intriguing, it takes you to a peaceful place...A beautiful experience...everlasting impression....One I'm sure you will treasure for a long time...Thanks for sharing and Thank you for your comment on my poetry..God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:51:00 PM
beauifully written james =)...i like this!! ~best wishes~ *Breana
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