The silence between the words

I love the silence between words, because when I’m talking to her,
every time she stutters, my heartbeat waits for her words to make me alive again.
Every time she looks at me, I think that maybe she’s the one.
Every time I confess my love for her, her silence between the words makes me feel important.

Was she the one, or was I just overthinking?
Those silences between the words could make me impatient,
but when she’s silent, I get to look at her tender face, her mesmerizing eyes.
That’s the time when she’s not trying to fit into the class, or trying to be someone else.
That’s the time she is what I like — she was not like us.

That’s why I loved the silence between the words — because I never got an answer from it.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Hello The Bloody Pen, So nice to meet you. I think this is a great reason for liking her. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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August 31, 2025 at 10:26 AM
Hello Nobody Pen, i am glad I made your day bright. Enjoy your weekend. My friend. /Darlene/
Pen Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 10:07 PM
Thanks for sharing your perspective. I feel a little proud that I made someone feel a girl who was never real, real. Thank you, /Darlene/. Have a good day
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Hello Bloody Pen, oh you are welcome. To me she was real. I hope you have a good day. Enjoy your day m y friend. /Darlene/
Pen Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 2:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene. I liked how you acknowledged the girl who doesn’t exist. Have a great day, my friend.”
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Hello Bloody Pen, Oh , thank you for explaining. My friend. Enjoy your4 day my friend. /Darlene/
Pen Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 5:34 PM
There was no girl- the silence it self can feel alive, that's what I turned into a girl.
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