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One of those once in a lifetime happenings.

The Shower

The shower
By Franklin Price
9/13/2017

It's early morn near London town
We're outside  for a smoke
The story I'm about to tell
Is real and not a joke

Across the street apartments
and, at this early hour,
In the middle of the second floor
Is a woman in the shower

The window large and crystal clear
No curtains in the way
As we watched, I'm thinking to myself,
What a way to start the day

There was no fog to block the view
Watched as she washed her hair
Then as she soaped her body
Could see all the parts were there

I felt I was a voyeur
She had not a thing to hide
My wife, the other one of we,
Said it's time we went inside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 13, 2017 at 10:26 AM
LOL funny ending too Franklin :)
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September 13, 2017 at 3:42 PM
So glad you enjoyed this story. I may have taken just a little literary license at the end. I may have paraphrased...LOL
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