The Shout

They stood there like ghosts
these apparitions.

 Survival was attrition-
 Eyes, like big black holes.

Slowly ,barefoot , moved 
these emaciated Poles.

The one in front ,raised his hand
and pointed to that heap of sand.

Skin hung on his frame;
who was to carry this evil shame?

He let out a guttural shriek! 
This shrouded and tormented freak.

Had bid farewell to his next of kin-
through the stacks this dreadful sin.

With feeble walk he made the gate;
aware that  they had not sealed his fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 11:47 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:30 PM
THEO, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:10 PM
An extremely chilling write with vivid description and imagery :-) Hugs jan xx
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