The Ship Wreck

The ship Wreck 
A sparkle, the freighter exploded and up in the air I flew. Looking down the ship 
had vanished in the glitter of sunlight. Into the sea I fell, bubbles and angst, 
but I saw above me a raft. The sea, calm, always is, it’s the wind that screams 
in defeat as it can’t bend the sea to its will; and shallow land that tries to stop 
its progress, the freedom to be itself. Night, around me danced the women 
I had loved. I drank their nectar and became the strongest man on earth.
My hearing, acute, when tons of iron hit the bottom of the sea I heard screams 
of suffering steel and humanity, in a common voice. I willed sea to become terra 
firma, silky sand; I dragged the raft behind me like a sledge, heading for the red 
mountain where sun never sets because it has no sea to cool into. 
 Women had disappeared into fluffy clouds and useless heavenly angels, without 
their sustenance I lost my potency, and the sea flooded the land. When my raft 
drifted into Sidney harbour it was New Year’s Eve, fairy light committed suicide 
by jumping into dark, shark infested water. The scream of broken steel and man 
never stopped ringing in my ears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 24, 2015 at 11:22 PM
JAN, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Hansen Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Thank you SKAT A
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Jan. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Hansen Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 11:08 AM
thank you Carol we are driving up to Cascais tomorrow, right now it is too hot to write.
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:24 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Oskar. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 6:55 PM
Creative and well expressed on ship wreck, jan
Hansen Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 2:36 AM
thank you Dr. Ram Metha
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June 30, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Oooooh. I liked stumbling upon this piece! Excellent work! Keep it up please!! Always Laura
Hansen Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:11 PM
thank you Laura
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June 30, 2011 at 1:17 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as I have enjoyed your amazing creative poetry tonight.. wonderful words to share luv..
Hansen Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:12 PM
thank you Linda
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