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The Shape of Conformity

Ice is water that held the container tight
and found the shape of its containment just right.
Water has no shape when not confined,
No dish, no jar, or holding wall to design.
Vapor is water without many friends
Up from the heat and containment it assends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/8/2023 1:59:00 AM
A very intelligent poem. Well done.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/8/2023 3:34:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment. I do however wonder if it needs a wrap up couple of lines thought or if it is done as it stands.

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