The Shape of Conformity

Ice is water that held the container tight
and found the shape of its containment just right.
Water has no shape when not confined,
No dish, no jar, or holding wall to design.
Vapor is water without many friends
Up from the heat and containment it assends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buhagiar Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:59 AM
A very intelligent poem. Well done.
Hawley Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 3:34 AM
Thank you for the compliment. I do however wonder if it needs a wrap up couple of lines thought or if it is done as it stands.
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