The Shadow On the Wall

When I first saw the shadow on my wall,
I turned, expecting someone big and tall—
my dad or grandpa—to be standing there.
I was alone. Then I could only stare;
the shadow had begun to dart around.
It vanished suddenly. I heard a sound,
a high-pitched scream. I didn’t know it came
from me till my big sister called my name
and said, “It was a dream. Go back to sleep.”
When it returned I felt sure I could keep
its visits to myself. It moved from floor  
to wall to what-not shelves to closet door.
It showed itself to no one else. I grew
accustomed to its presence, and I knew
it posed no threat to me--but then things changed.
The shadow morphed into a thing deranged
that uttered wicked words just for my ears
and injured me with unseen hands. My fears
soon forced me to reveal my secrets to
my mom and dad. I cried, “What can you do?
Please make this awful thing leave me alone!”
Just minutes later, Dad was on the phone.
When they came to my room, their eyes were red.
The words they spoke ran circles in my head.
They’d found some “caring friends” who soon would make
this wicked shadow that had made me quake
with fear be GONE. Soon I was in a place
where gentle men in white discussed my “case.” 
My parents said that in no time at all,
I’d have no thoughts of shadows on the wall
that speak foul words and have strong, grasping hands.
They promised that they’d soon be making plans
to take me home—to get on with our lives.
I won’t tell them the shadow now wields knives.



September 19, 2018, entered in Tania Kitchin's Scary or Spooky 
Poem Contest
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Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 9:41 AM
I might just leave my light on tonight Janice. Congratulations Tom.
Canerdy Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Thanks so much, Tom!
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Excellent poem Janice, congrats :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thanks so much, Gary! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Scary! Congrats on your win, Janie. Well penned.
Canerdy Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Mcferran Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 9:26 PM
This is so suspenseful... and the ENDING! :O Brilliantly done (and much scarier than my poem)! Congrats to you, too!
Canerdy Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:27 PM
Thanks so much, Rhona! Janice
Kitchin Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 5:14 PM
A well written scary poem, made me think back to being a child and being scared of things in my room, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest
Canerdy Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Tania, I am SO GLAD to have placed in this contest Thank you so much! Janice
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