The Sexes

perfectly full moon
sun sit watching silver ball
hold men in traction.

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carehumanityimagemoonhaiku

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2016 10:24:00 AM

Her alluring attraction...men held in traction! Lovely haiku, Iris. ~ Regards // paul

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 4/13/2016 7:05:00 PM

Thanks Paul. c u in a bit.

Funom Makama

Date: 2/25/2016 9:38:00 AM

This is beautiful and creative. Thank you so much for this lovely and useful share....

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 2/25/2016 7:08:00 PM

Thank u dear one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2016 5:11:00 PM

Sometimes it(the moon) does hold our attention..I enjoyed rading this one..Thanks for your visit..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2016 10:27:00 AM

I think the picture is a good one for the poem..Sara

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 2/19/2016 5:38:00 PM

Thanks Sara. Couldn't find that perfect image.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/17/2016 10:42:00 PM

Wonderful! :)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 2/18/2016 4:31:00 PM

Arthur; about 'the Samaritan' You spoke for countless persons.