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The Self Incarcerated Virgo

Vanity and pride are my prison Inhibitions bind and trap my desires Relentlessly striving for perfection Greatness eludes my every move Outwardly concealing my inner turmoil *Inspired by Danielle White, Acrostic Astrology Contest

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Brian Anderson

Date: 4/16/2009 12:05:00 PM

wonderful write but it seems like you could use a gemini ( big smile). well done, kat

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/9/2009 1:51:00 PM

Nice Acrostic. And you made me think. It is true that vanity and pride may keep us from letting our hair down and running with the wind. Thus the prison. Good write. Thanks for sharing. And welcome to Poetry Soup.