The Seldom Way We Walk

The Seldom way we walk
 
We walk upon a fine line of care 
Of put myself out there and clinging to my share
, of like me like you, and love all living things
because they have feelings too
True?
That women hold us gently from the depths of their souls
and men reach out and touch our souls softly
That everything we feel is what we feel for those
They know its what I've chose
That it all comes from within
That when we tell , men and women that they are great and and they are good
With conviction we say that  are words are to be  believed
Because all we want to do is to give and to recieve
 
Once someone has totally invested in us
With faith in ourselves and in Jesus a strong belief we release back into the world the love 
and care they have shown us 
We pray along with hope that those who have loved us shall be loved and cared about in 
return
and whats left is a little bit of fear that we use to patrol us not hurt ourseles or any other 
living being
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 7:35 AM
typos but good idea and writing, welcome to the soup, would like to see more form you.
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 6:53 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Amy. I wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Amy, Welcome to Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your poem. It has a wonderful expressive feel to it. Keep writing. Sincerely, DAS-J
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