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The Secret Storm

Within cries decreed with shadows mourning Mortal sin translucent through eyes scorning Brewing storms amidst silent atramental abyss Accruing waves breathed loves lingering kiss Minds melting transfixed thru ravaging ruins Blinds building walls amongst cerebral fluids Demonic seeds with remorseful ruling hands Chronic dementia within bloodstained sands Temptations afloat amidst sinking verbal voids Frustrations colliding of inner spacing asteroids Ignorance blissful with hemispheres declining Innocence destroying within minds confining Illusions manifesting with tribal ritual intentions Extrusions of thoughts entwined with abstentions Tumultuous seas of marauding cores deepening Tempestuous squalls landing ashore secreting. ...a BDHR-[backward double helix reversible] Mourning shadows with decreed cries within Scorning eyes through translucent mortal sin Abyss atramental silent amidst storms brewing Kiss lingering loves breathed waves accruing Ruins ravaging thru transfixed melting minds Fluids cerebral amongst walls building blinds Hands ruling remorseful with seeds demonic Sands stained blood within dementia chronic Voids verbal sinking amidst afloat temptations Asteroids spacing inner of colliding frustrations Declining hemispheres with blissful ignorance Confining minds within destroying innocence Intentions ritual tribal with manifesting illusions Abstentions with entwined thoughts of extrusions Deepening cores marauding of seas tumultuous Secreting ashore landing squalls tempestuous. Oct.09.2018 Soap Opera Titles Poetry..."The Secret Storm" Sponsored by: Sian St. John N/A for contest

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Date: 10/11/2018 7:25:00 AM
ohh my, a real masterpiece of a poem, WW... nailed it... huggs
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Date: 10/10/2018 10:20:00 PM
Thoughts are twirling, whirling and tossing- deep inside the brain. I have been warned, it is secret of the storm. :) Oh my!! What will I do? Ahhh, yes!! Simply enjoy these words going forwards and backwards, from you. :) Love and depth. Winged Warrior. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/10/2018 6:39:00 PM
Awesome WW, you have mastered this form superbly my friend. Your poetry is fantastic...Love & Peace Charlie
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Date: 10/10/2018 12:56:00 PM
Remarkable. I'm in awe. ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/10/2018 12:15:00 PM
A brainstorm blowing through the corridors of the mind..Well penned WW..
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Date: 10/10/2018 11:23:00 AM
Well done my talented friend..I am amazed by how easily you write reversible poems. You have won already.
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Date: 10/9/2018 6:59:00 PM
Hi John, this is a most creative piece, showcasing your poetic skills and imagination. This is brilliance as far as I am concerned. I could never attempt something like this. This is excellent. One gets lost within the wonder of the thoughts. I swim within the wonder of your words, the wonder of your thought. Good luck in the contest. This write is a win in my book. All I keep thinking is excellent. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike
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Date: 10/9/2018 6:49:00 PM
Impressive!!! Good luck WW:) How long did it take you to write it?
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Date: 10/9/2018 6:03:00 PM
I don't know how you do this. Brilliant again WW! Excellent :)
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