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The Secret Sanctuary

In moments of despondent spirits I turn to you, the resplendent paradise of secret dreams anew. The opalescent orchard orchestrates tender hopes, like cuddling chrysanthemum my fading fear elopes. Bursting bubbles of beguile blossoms sprinkle love, frivolous faith nurtures nascent nest of white dove. I find solace in sumptuous serenades through storms, in symphony of mellowed streams, my anxiety reforms. Intertwined petals of Cynthia and magnolia waltz, undressing my weariness to dissolve draped faults. Butterflies blissfully slip into alluring aurora, a healing touch melts my heart in gleaming aura. A sapphire gem dropped by the albatross as rain, absorbs my tormented memories in nascent vervain. The seeds of lavender mellows in whispers strum, silk strings of your fir-kissed ensnaring soft hum. How gracefully my soul dances behind velvet dew, as Asteria and Aphrodite fuse their worlds anew. In the vineyard of blushing lullabies in light, my musk-soaked pages flip with snowflakes bright. The oceans of my universe peek into a shore afar, dripping in crevices of my sanctuary as your star. I doze off to a euphony of embraced fingers in sleep, this secret paradise, our eternal promise I'll keep. August 17, 2020 Sanctuary Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One ~Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 8/23/2020 3:13:00 PM
Just like the 'euphony' in the penultimate line, so is the euphony of your entire poem -- no possibility of 'cacophony' sneaking into your writes, Aditi! Congrats on your top win in the contest, Gershon
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Date: 8/22/2020 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Aditi, great rhyme, flow, with deep feelings. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2020 4:33:00 PM
Congrats for #1, perfectly deserved ~ John
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Date: 8/22/2020 12:22:00 PM
Lovely images, alliterations and rhyme, Aditi. Congratulations on your first place win. Sending you loving hugs.
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Date: 8/22/2020 10:53:00 AM
Reading this exquisite poem is pure bliss, Aditi. It's in my FAVES. Congratulations on your top win. :)
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Date: 8/22/2020 6:29:00 AM
Another spellbinding piece dear Aditi! Congratulations on your TOP WIN. A FAVE!!
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Date: 8/22/2020 5:44:00 AM
A wonderful poem that rhymes and flows very well in true couplet style.. We all need a place where we can find peace and I found that feeling in your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/18/2020 12:41:00 AM
Your muse is still thriving and bedazzles as always. The imagery is soothing and takes me to a place of quietude and restful bliss. My favorite couplet is this one: "The oceans of my universe peek into a shore afar, / dripping in crevices of my sanctuary as your star". Your poem is a haven of peace, my friend, one that the world needs more of. God bless you ~ John
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