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The Secret of Pickle

A simple pickle is the essence of life’s journey, The recipe of a very experienced granny, Who has put for the test of our taste bud, emotions we all taste from cradle to mud! Have you ever tried a lemon pickled sauce? With salt, jaggery, chilli fried with lime chops! The tongue is treated to a host of delights, takes your culinary experience to new heights! The lime is the sourness that we all know, When heartbroken in life and lost in love, The chilli is the anger that grows deep in us, When we lack understanding and forgiveness! Jaggery is that ancient mellowed sweetness, That brings us cheer that we call happiness! And Salt added to remind us of its potential, For survival of species on Earth, it’s essential! one more secret ingredient not listed before, The bitterness of fenugreek from the core, sprinkled into the mixture in a small measure, Like life’s resentments so we value pleasure! So in a simple home made granny pickle, The wisdom of several civilisations trickle, When you hold a spoon of pickle in hand, You have all of life’s emotions to understand! Date written 20/02/2020 4th placement Pickle Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter

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Date: 4/17/2021 6:35:00 PM
The way you mix pickle and life is interesting, Krish, great writing:)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/17/2021 11:09:00 PM
Thanks Jo! Thanks for going back to read this poem! This is one of the poems published in Soup Anthology.
Date: 2/10/2021 8:31:00 PM
A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Krish ~
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/11/2021 4:24:00 AM
Thanks Line! So pleased you like it and thanks for your kind feedback.
Date: 2/23/2020 9:45:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Krish:-) hugs jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/23/2020 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Jan! Hugs and hugs!!
Date: 2/22/2020 3:45:00 PM
Congrats, Trish, for your well-deserved win for this very insightful and witty verse! Well done - my kind of poetry! Many thanks for your kind comments re my tongue-twisting entry in the contest and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/23/2020 1:31:00 AM
Thanks bob. Nice to know you through these pages!
Date: 2/22/2020 1:25:00 PM
... from cradle to mud! You tell us about the lemon pickled sauce and emtions! Congratulations, Krish!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/22/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Kim! And congratulations on your win and a fantastic write!
Date: 2/22/2020 11:22:00 AM
Hi Krish! Congratulations on your placement in Nina's contest. My grandmother was famous for her pickles - Mrs. Pickel's pickles. This poem is a masterful integration of your "life" theme and the elements of a pickle. Enjoyed!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/22/2020 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Sam! And congratulations on your grand win too! I read your poem and saw the signature of your granny! Superb write!
Date: 2/20/2020 3:45:00 PM
I enjoyed this - it delighted me with its energy and content all the way through! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/20/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thanks Caycay, fond hugs from me!
Date: 2/20/2020 1:03:00 PM
Hello Krish Redhaka, there is emotions in a pickle! Oh.... I love dill pickles. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2020 5:34:00 PM
Oh Krish I always enjoy the pickles.Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/20/2020 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, have a great day and enjoy the pickles!
Date: 2/20/2020 11:41:00 AM
All that from a simple pickle. wonderful metaphors Krish, well done...
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/20/2020 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Charlie! Pleased you like it!
Date: 2/20/2020 8:26:00 AM
Well done...I see you don't make any jokes when it comes to eating...You made this delicious...
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/20/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, for your appreciation of my recipe. I am a hobby cook!
Date: 2/20/2020 7:05:00 AM
So in a simple home made granny pickle,..The wisdom of several civilizations trickle,... You took the contest to a different level.. Great entry Krish.. Good luck..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/20/2020 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Jenish for your appreciation! Much appreciated! Regards
Date: 2/20/2020 6:38:00 AM
what a wonderful recipe for life I think you should market your pickle Krish!:-) hugs Jan x
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/20/2020 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Jan, for your very kind words. People like wine and pickle get better with age!

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