The Secret of Pickle

A simple pickle is the essence of life’s journey,
The recipe of a very experienced granny,
Who has put for the test of our taste bud,
emotions we all taste from cradle to mud!

Have you ever tried a lemon pickled sauce?
With salt, jaggery, chilli fried with lime chops!
The tongue is treated to a host of delights,
takes your culinary experience to new heights!

The lime is the sourness that we all know,
When heartbroken in life and lost in love,
The chilli is the anger that grows deep in us,
When we lack understanding and forgiveness!

Jaggery is that ancient mellowed sweetness,
That brings us cheer that we call happiness!
And Salt added to remind us of its potential,
For survival of species on Earth, it’s essential!

one more secret ingredient not listed before,
The bitterness of fenugreek from the core,
sprinkled into the mixture in a small measure,
Like life’s resentments so we value pleasure! 

So in a simple home made granny pickle, 
The wisdom of several civilisations trickle,
When you hold a spoon of pickle in hand,
You have all of life’s emotions to understand!

Date written 20/02/2020 
4th placement
Pickle Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Daniel Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:35 PM
The way you mix pickle and life is interesting, Krish, great writing:)
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:09 PM
Thanks Jo! Thanks for going back to read this poem! This is one of the poems published in Soup Anthology.
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 8:31 PM
A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Krish ~
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 4:24 AM
Thanks Line! So pleased you like it and thanks for your kind feedback.
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Krish:-) hugs jan xx
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 10:24 AM
Thanks Jan! Hugs and hugs!!
Hinshaw Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 3:45 PM
Congrats, Trish, for your well-deserved win for this very insightful and witty verse! Well done - my kind of poetry! Many thanks for your kind comments re my tongue-twisting entry in the contest and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 1:31 AM
Thanks bob. Nice to know you through these pages!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 1:25 PM
... from cradle to mud! You tell us about the lemon pickled sauce and emtions! Congratulations, Krish!
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 1:58 PM
Thanks Kim! And congratulations on your win and a fantastic write!
Kauffman Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Hi Krish! Congratulations on your placement in Nina's contest. My grandmother was famous for her pickles - Mrs. Pickel's pickles. This poem is a masterful integration of your "life" theme and the elements of a pickle. Enjoyed!
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Thanks Sam! And congratulations on your grand win too! I read your poem and saw the signature of your granny! Superb write!
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 3:45 PM
I enjoyed this - it delighted me with its energy and content all the way through! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thanks Caycay, fond hugs from me!
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 1:03 PM
Hello Krish Redhaka, there is emotions in a pickle! Oh.... I love dill pickles. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Oh Krish I always enjoy the pickles.Enjoy your evening my friend.
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 1:37 PM
Thanks Darlene, have a great day and enjoy the pickles!
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 11:41 AM
All that from a simple pickle. wonderful metaphors Krish, well done...
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Charlie! Pleased you like it!
Michael Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Well done...I see you don't make any jokes when it comes to eating...You made this delicious...
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Arturo, for your appreciation of my recipe. I am a hobby cook!
Somadas Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 7:05 AM
So in a simple home made granny pickle,..The wisdom of several civilizations trickle,... You took the contest to a different level.. Great entry Krish.. Good luck..
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Thanks Jenish for your appreciation! Much appreciated! Regards
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 6:38 AM
what a wonderful recipe for life I think you should market your pickle Krish!:-) hugs Jan x
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Thanks Jan, for your very kind words. People like wine and pickle get better with age!
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