The Secret

The secret of life said the woman, is to behave
In a way that is generally thought of as good.
To be careful of word and kind in thought,
And never get overwrought
About things that do not matter

The secret of life said the man, is to be strong
And brave and bawdy, to treat others
With authority and boldness,
And always win the fights
You choose to engage in

The secret of life said the child is to cry
When needy, and cry when sad.
To be happy with small things like
Paper and sand, to not become
emotionless or overbearing
The secret of life is to not grow old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 12:02 PM
Yes, remembering the good old days of keeping up with the Jones' - At 85 I recall the striving past, but don't really give a damn anymore. I like this one. Congrats on the selection. daver
Locke Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Daver. I have found I can grow old without growing up quite successfully ;-)
Kurdyla Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Kaye, Again, I am impressed by your work. In it's simplicity and directness it always seem to fill the cup without spilling over. This is a wonderful talent! Thanks for your comment on the poem. If you go to the member's contest winners page you should be able to see more "end line" poems of that type from the recent "end line" poem contest. Tom
James Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:22 PM
What a thoughful write. I love the perceptions. I have only been writting for a short time and i'm amazed by the greatness of peoples styles.
Pickett Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Excellent flow my friend.. Keep em comin'....:JP]
Moon Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 9:03 AM
this is very intersting...it gets me thinking...good write and keep it up...God Bless...--Brittany--
Palli Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Interesting thoughts
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