The seashell

I found a seashell in the car today;
it rolled into her deserted footwell
as I turned into our old parking bay;

it lay, with all the stories it could tell.

We gathered it, together, on some beach
the girl and I, amidst the water, wine,
hypothesis of things beyond our reach;

when was that? Oh, the summer 69,
I think, it’s hard to tell, these autumn days.

Would it still proclaim her lost siren’s call
if held to ear? Or, echo sea’s malaise,
lashing waves, the inevitable squall?

The shell, it sits, its inner pinkness lures
me still; though it is long devoid of soul,
it brings a recollection that endures;
A summer beach, her face, a happy stroll.
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Crandall Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Beautifully written Terry
Miller Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 1:30 AM
Thank you David I appreciate your kind comment
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Dear Terry, congratulations on your win in Craig's contest with your pensive, thought provoking, memory provoking gem. I love the last stanzas with the memories of the shell and the wishes of young love. Blessings to you!
Miller Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Thank you Sam
Ashley Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 6:17 PM
Dear Terry, I adore this poignant gem. It's soulful and hauntingly beautiful. The symbolism of the shell; of a past relationship and the joy of a certain summer day "the girl and I, amidst the water, wine" is expressed with vivid imagery. The melancholy that the shell also evokes about the "summer 69" is palpable. A deep, nostalgic, emotional piece. Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Miller Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Thank you Susan for your generous and kind comments, warm wishes back to you.
Parker Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on your win
Miller Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so much
mysore Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Happy writing.
Miller Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:51 AM
Thank you so much
Cornish Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Yes, the echoes of ourselves cannot be forgotten
Miller Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:52 AM
Thank you Craig
M  Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Such a lovely poem of reflection Terry….the last line ties it together perfectly! Loved this…Debx
Miller Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 1:53 AM
Thank you Deb
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