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The Sea's Caress

The breeze of the sea has lifted me
I feel the caress of her salty kiss
With her my words can float away free
The breeze of the sea has lifted me
To sail my thoughts through waves filigree
Then write of her from my hidden abyss
The breeze of the sea has lifted me
I feel the caress of her salty kiss


1-29-2022

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Jeanne Mcgee Date: 4/28/2022 10:25:00 AM Hi John, so nice to hear from you again. There is no doubt that living by the sea has influenced me a great deal. She is flowing through my veins, I'm sure. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 4/24/2022 3:20:00 PM Jeanne, your adoration of the sea is always so evident in your art (I love your "Moon Kissed Wave" painting among many others), and what a delightful triolet you have created here to continue your artistic expression in words. The feelings of freedom and being caressed and lifted are all elements that have sustained my love affair with the ocean since my youth. I so enjoyed this and can relate to every word... a Fav. Warm wishes ~ John Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/8/2022 4:58:00 PM You did a beautiful job here. I sure hope it's a winner. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 2/10/2022 6:27:00 AM xoxo Thanks so much. Jeanne Mcgee Date: 2/8/2022 5:10:00 PM xoxo Thanks so much.