The Sculpture What Am I Thinking

What do you think, am I majestic or just plain *****
Do I have feet of clay and by you am I even seen
Is my look one of apathy, love or some old remembered fear
Am I a deep thinker, or just relaxing enjoying a scenic scene
What was the artist thinking when he created me
Am I some hidden meaningful moment in his life
Or am I just a weird kind of rendition of a tree
Put together expertly by creative hands, chisel, knife
Whatever I am, I am certainly a creation unique
That causes a poet to stop, to wonder and to stare
If only I could tell you what I’m thinking, if only I could speak
But all I can do is my originality with you today share!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/2/2012 3:09:00 AM
I know i have asked what do you think! well written i loved this lizzie thank you..
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Date: 6/16/2012 2:55:00 PM
Yes, darling there is only one of you here on this earth; the world couldn't handle another so always know you are special Lizzie, to so many I might add! Love, me!
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:37:00 AM
You are you Lizzie .... a lovely and careful lady. - well written poem. - always oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/13/2012 8:33:00 AM
I think you're majestic ;) =Juli-Michelle=
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