The Scream

The poor rain water 
Screams on the road 
Run over by cars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Carlson Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 12:30 AM
rain water screaming as it's being run over by cars! pure genius at work - Kyle
K. Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 10:16 PM
I really like the thoughts you put in here, Betim :) Very unique! Yup, if I were water, I would most definitely be screaming :) very cool :) enjoyed reading this :D
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 12:48 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Betim. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 12:35 PM
Nice visual, betim
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