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The Scream

The poor rain water Screams on the road Run over by cars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/4/2011 12:30:00 AM
rain water screaming as it's being run over by cars! pure genius at work - Kyle
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:16:00 PM
I really like the thoughts you put in here, Betim :) Very unique! Yup, if I were water, I would most definitely be screaming :) very cool :) enjoyed reading this :D
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:48:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Betim. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:35:00 PM
Nice visual, betim
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Book: Shattered Sighs