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The Scent of Water

The scent of water If summer sun at its vertex will not perspire, How would I burning in hell will respire ? If sparrow sits on mango tree with open beak, I too am surely craving for a water streak, If in the desert, the rainfall fails to revive, How can I without your love survive ? Loneliness has left me parched and dry, Lover's lanes empty, pleasant meets a far cry, The long dark night, seems so unending, To my injured self, Is there any mending ? If you can, give me a bit of sunshine, Then why would I need the addicting wine ? Hope is all that sustains my life, Might take me out of the current strife, The Scent of water, as clouds appear in sky, Oh Rain! come rain, I am about to die, Give your divine showers so as I may thrive, Bloom may with tiny drops, even the cacti ! Written on 15/7/14 Contest- the scent of water Sponsor- Faye Gibson Entered for the "Rain" contest by Silent one Awarded 3rd place win

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Date: 12/24/2015 4:57:00 PM
Fantastic couplets , congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations, Dr. Sharma on your winning poem in the Silent One contest. Your verses express deep emotions of love, hope and solitude; never despair, my friend...all it takes is faith. I hope you find love and happiness. Thank you for your comment today. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 12/24/2015 9:25:00 AM
Dr Sharma congratulations on this win!
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:14:00 AM
DR UPMA, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/23/2015 4:23:00 PM
Lovely, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/20/2014 4:37:00 PM
QUICK - no rhyme for this contest! Soup Mail L & L
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Date: 7/16/2014 5:25:00 PM
very nice one from you. Sure would like to try this one but I don't have a clue. You, however, really came through!!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/17/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thnx for ur visit Andrea!
Date: 7/16/2014 12:26:00 PM
Hope you find an oasis of love. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 12:56:00 PM
Thnx for lovely wishes n great comments Matthew my dear friend!
Date: 7/16/2014 9:56:00 AM
Excellent.....thanks
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 10:18:00 AM
Thnx Judy my dear friend!

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