The Scent of Water

The scent of water

If summer sun at its vertex will not perspire,
How would I burning in hell will respire ?

If sparrow sits on mango tree with open beak,
I too am surely craving for a water streak,

If in the desert, the rainfall fails to revive,
How can I without your love survive ?

Loneliness has left me parched and dry,
Lover's lanes empty, pleasant meets a far cry,

The long dark night, seems so unending,
To my injured self, Is there any mending ?

If you can, give me a bit of sunshine,
Then why would I need the addicting wine ?

Hope is all that sustains my life,
Might take me out of the current strife,

The Scent of water, as clouds appear in sky,
Oh Rain! come rain, I am about to die,

Give your divine showers so as I may thrive,
Bloom may with tiny drops, even the cacti !



Written on 15/7/14
Contest- the scent of water
Sponsor- Faye Gibson

Entered for the "Rain" contest by Silent one
Awarded 3rd place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Fantastic couplets , congrats on your win!!!
Crisci Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations, Dr. Sharma on your winning poem in the Silent One contest. Your verses express deep emotions of love, hope and solitude; never despair, my friend...all it takes is faith. I hope you find love and happiness. Thank you for your comment today. Hugs, Andrew.
Tor Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Dr Sharma congratulations on this win!
A  Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:14 AM
DR UPMA, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Lovely, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Guzzi Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 4:37 PM
QUICK - no rhyme for this contest! Soup Mail L & L
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:25 PM
very nice one from you. Sure would like to try this one but I don't have a clue. You, however, really came through!!!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Thnx for ur visit Andrea!
Anish Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Hope you find an oasis of love. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Thnx for lovely wishes n great comments Matthew my dear friend!
Konos Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Excellent.....thanks
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Thnx Judy my dear friend!
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