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The Scene of School

Saw in school, the scene I said, Sooth in scene, I said it shade, Vital is green but over is red, How in deep, the nature has made, Beauty is soul, off all is dead, World was worse, if off was lead Life is not, if don't is add, Superb is this,what the above said, never seen a man, like he is mad.

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Date: 3/16/2016 11:25:00 PM
muhammad ahmad, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:57:00 PM
MUHAMMAD, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:16:00 PM
I forgot to mention, I quite enjoyed this line! "Superb is this,what the above said, never seen a man, like he is mad."
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:15:00 PM
Interesting... it's a bit confusing though. Keep it up!
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