The Scene of School

Saw in school, the scene I said,
Sooth in scene, I said it shade,
Vital is green but over is red,
How in deep, the nature has made,
Beauty is soul, off all is dead,
World was worse, if off was lead
 Life is not, if don't is add,
Superb is this,what the above said,
never seen a man, like he is mad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 6, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 16, 2016 at 11:25 PM
muhammad ahmad, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 14, 2016 at 10:57 PM
MUHAMMAD, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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December 25, 2010 at 10:16 PM
I forgot to mention, I quite enjoyed this line! "Superb is this,what the above said, never seen a man, like he is mad."
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December 25, 2010 at 10:15 PM
Interesting... it's a bit confusing though. Keep it up!
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