The Scar

Inside my heart
Hate has left a mark.
A scaar so deep, 
That I must always keep.
That mark I must always carry, 
It's the slightest bit scary.
To think that I must bear
This awful sear.
This sign of hurt, of pain.
Now I've nothing to gain.
But I will learn to deal with this mark,
This mark that was left inside my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 11, 2010 at 1:27 PM
This is excellent. I like the logic in this poem. The theme is consistent. Hopefully, the scar will be replaced with love one day. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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June 11, 2010 at 9:10 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashley. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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June 10, 2010 at 6:35 PM
A mark sometimes have an affect on us ... we must somehow reach out and try to move on, deep write...p.d.
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June 10, 2010 at 5:51 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family of Poets.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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