The Sands To Damascus

I'll cross the dunes where the sand has grown
And lift my eyes to the horizon last
For me to follow to my lovers home
Travel the desert this hell so vast

I need to find Damascus, where my love lives
The sky has been watched, the sands read
To give her my love, the nights we'll relive
With joyous comfort in her luscious bed
I'll not make Damascus if caught in a storm
Die alone in this desert, thoughts of love still warm


Frederic Parker
contest.In the Desert
9/15/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/22/2014 3:44:00 PM
Always the mysterious adventurer, the lover ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/22/2014 6:38:00 AM
I like the line where the sand has grown, compelling, you drew me in to your desert and I enjoyed the read. grats on your win
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:44:00 PM
wonderful take on the theme Frederic many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:21:00 PM
- Truly a lovely winning poem,Frederic ! - Congrats with the 3rd place - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 9:59:00 AM
A wonderful romantic write about the desert.. Something I never dreamt of... Your muse tis a great one indeed!!! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/21/2014 1:58:00 AM
such a lovely romantic one for Nette's contest. And I see you won. Big congratulations to you!
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:30:00 AM
Wow a romantic write with desert Frederic! This is so unique n passionate! Huge congrats!
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:51:00 PM
Written with a tender pen, heartfelt Frederic. Congrats to you
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Date: 9/20/2014 3:02:00 PM
incredibly done with a longing so deeply marked, Frederick.. proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/20/2014 4:30:00 PM
Thank you nette,I'm glad you saw the longing as that was at its heart
Date: 9/20/2014 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Frederic. I enjoyed reading your poem and especially loved the last line.
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Date: 9/20/2014 5:28:00 AM
Nice take on desert's theme, Frederic. congrats
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