The Sad Camellia

camellia droops
under the weight of rain
blossoms fall like tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Puddifoot Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 3:32 PM
this is a really lovely haiku :-)
Austin Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Nothing sadder than a beautiful flower left drooping after a spring or summer rain. Love, daver
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