Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

The Runners Cursive

the runners cursive
   upon new fallen winter
      rake leans against rails

11/5/2019
A late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Tania Kitchin

runners - either of the longitudinal pieces on which a sled or sleigh slides

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Line Gauthier November 13, 2019 at 7:00 AM Congrats on your win, Kim.

Gershon Wolf November 10, 2019 at 8:12 PM Those runners certainly do lean at rakish angles! Nicely conceived and written, Kim! Congrats on your win in the contest! Cheers, Gershon Kim Rodrigues November 10, 2019 at 9:01 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Jan Allison November 9, 2019 at 1:01 AM lovely piece Kim, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues November 9, 2019 at 4:49 AM Thank you, sweet Jan!

Robert L. Hinshaw November 8, 2019 at 11:54 AM Congrats, Kim for your win for this beauty. Honored to share No. 2 spot with you - Bob Kim Rodrigues November 9, 2019 at 4:49 AM Thank you, dear poet!

Anisha Dutta November 8, 2019 at 9:01 AM Congratulation to win on this nice piece. Love. Kim Rodrigues November 9, 2019 at 4:49 AM Thank you, Anisha! xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 8, 2019 at 8:11 AM You have captured the change of seasons masterfully in this haiku. Congratulations on your win Kim, xomo! Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2019 at 8:14 AM Thank you, dear friend! :)

Kurt Ravidas November 8, 2019 at 5:09 AM The rake that rests until better times is a beautiful image. Congrats, Kim. Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2019 at 6:45 AM Thanks so much, Kurt!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2019 at 4:48 AM - Congratulations on your win, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2019 at 6:45 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2019 at 7:49 PM very creative imagery, Kim. Congrats on your win. Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 8:27 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Charles Messina November 7, 2019 at 7:06 PM It looks so pretty once raked! Very nice Kim. Congrats on your placement! Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 8:27 PM Thank you, Charles!

Tania Kitchin November 7, 2019 at 4:55 PM Kim, congratulations on your placement with your creative haiku and thanks for participating! Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 6:49 PM Thank you, Tania! :)

Vijay Pandit November 5, 2019 at 9:16 AM Festive imagery, Kim--in winter's revelry. Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2019 at 7:27 PM Thank you, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2019 at 8:36 AM - No runners for me ... too cold :) - A great haiku, Kim :) - I chose winter too :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2019 at 7:26 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Chris Green November 5, 2019 at 7:44 AM This was nice and snowy my friend. My rake is still in process and probably will be for a long time. : ) Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2019 at 7:26 PM Thank you, Chris!

Phil Capitano November 5, 2019 at 7:31 AM Interesting image, Kim, I can see it from here, lol (the snow is already piling up in my yard). Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2019 at 7:26 PM Thank you, Phil!